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Cake day: October 28th, 2022

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  • I only ever drink cold brew as the occasional treat at a cafe. I have a moka pot at home and just have that coffee over ice. I personally found myself struggling to make it well at home.

    1. It tastes a bit less acidic or smoother than traditional coffee. You really notice the difference comparing a black cold brew to a black iced americano.

    2. You can serve it chilled or over ice. I’ve never heard of reheating it but if you were to try I’d suggest a low heat and to reheat slowly. You might introduce a burnt taste to it if it’s under high heat.


  • Imo it’s whites who are afraid the computer will do to them what they do to everyone else. I’ve written this comment elsewhere about these “safe AI” and “AI extinction risk” freaks.

    Given the mostly white, bourgeois preoccupation with “x-AI risk” (existential/extinction) I think the real “risk” is that the self-legitimating myths of capitalism will fall on muted microphones. Even 10 years ago when AI was still called machine learning and it was much less impressive (its outputs were exclusively categorization of inputs) and it required decades of breakthroughs and to be hooked up to every input in society and multiplexed with every output to do anything “harmful” the x-AI risk people were running around crying (this holds true today of LLMs and other statistically likely to exist content emitters).

    The pitch is always that the AI will decide the needs of the many outweigh the needs (private property rights) of the few. This is only scary if you are among that few. Even property rights obsessed liberals don’t think themselves among the few who will be exproprAIted but are outraged by the expropriation itself. It’s a boogyman spewed by the people who are the problem and we’re asked to share their fear. Ridiculous.

    Unlike other private property and artifacts of capital accumulation which are inert (the workers may organize against you but the steel mill itself won’t), the AI their capital gives birth to might in several decades time maybe organize against you (but not really).






  • Or would that seem too complaining/combative/passive aggressive?

    I would leave that out and not because of the tone of the additional information. The letter and its concerns are medical. I would keep it that way for now. You can bring other factors and circumstances in as appropriate if a back-and-forth correspondence develops. As written, your first letter is really concise and a strong plea. Don’t attach awkward bits and bobs to your aerodynamic masterpiece, they’ll just introduce drag. Less is more sometimes.



  • Don’t overcomplicate it. You’ve already stated you don’t expect to become pregnant in the preceding sentences. The bone you’re throwing them in their twisted bureaucrat minds is that you understand the risks of not taking contraceptives while on this medication. Something simple like, “I acknowledge and accept the increased risk of autism and ADHD of children who might be conceived while taking this medication.”


  • Really good overall. A few nits.

    I am unsure whether this is an oversight or intentional.

    I would cut this. It doesn’t add much value to speculate the cause of the cut and disrupts the flow of the strong argument you follow it up with.

    I have also previously written to the surgery about my rimegapant prescription, but have received no response.

    I would switch to active voice here. Try “I have also previously written to the surgery about my rimegapant prescription, but they have not responded to me.”

    However as the GP surgery won’t prescribe more than 8 tablets a month, I am unable to take it daily as a preventative, and so still suffer migraines.

    You can use fewer words for the same effect here and I think make this train of thought a bit smoother. “The GP won’t prescribe more than 8 tablets per month, which is insufficient for use as a daily preventative.” I think you also remove the following clause of that sentence regarding how you still suffer migraines

    and so still suffer migraines.

    since the next sentence, (I’ve quoted w/ some suggested changes)

    I suffer from migraine with aura which doubles the risk of stroke,

    beautifully connects the consequences of lacking an effective daily preventative to take and states the risk to you.

    They do usually work for me by ending a migraine

    I would cut usually, it’s a “weasel word”.

    topiramate prescription but have not received any response.

    Another chance to flip passive to active voice. “… but they have not responded to me.”

    Maybe as the penultimate sentence in your final paragraph acknowledge the risks to whatever unborn child the NHS is prioritizing above you, the patient. I hate it but it’ll hopefully push the patient has given informed consent button in the recipient’s mind.